I was up for evaluation this school year, and a couple of day as ago, I posted that had to add an addendum.The addendum basically says that I didn’t address my student evals because they’re useless as research shows that students consistently rate female professors lower than male professors, something I’ve blogged about before. 
So anyway, here’s what I sent. Putting it here for posterity and also for Slice of Life challenge reasons.
This addendum is to directly address these two comments from the dean:
“Unfortunately, student evaluations are not as high.”
AND
“In her self-evaluation, Prof. Brown does not directly address [the success and retention] data or her past student evaluations. She explains that most often, students’ ‘personal circumstances’ or refusal to take advantage of her office hours leads them to not complete her courses.”
I didn’t address the student evaluations because research has shown that students’ internalized sexism and racism affect the way they evaluate female faculty, especially female faculty of color. In other words, students rate female professors, and particularly female professors of color, lower than male professors, and they use different internalized measures to rate male versus female professors. Given that, I do not find the student evaluations issued by the school useful nor do I find them an accurate measure of my impact on students and their learning.
I prefer a focus on metacognition throughout the semester where students evaluate their own contribution to their learning, which is how I know that students’ personal circumstances have the biggest impact on whether they stay in the class or pass it.
Our students are more than numbers. Their education is impacted by factors outside of the classroom and the teachers’ control. Success and retention data does not take into account any of those factors nor does it take into account students’ own contributions to their learning (i.e., whether or not they continue to attend class after the withdrawal period, whether or not they do their assignments, etc.). For most students, I can tell you exactly why they may have stopped attending and/or participating in class. None of that is asked about nor reflected in the PCC success/retention data, and neither is it addressed in student evaluations. Nor does the PCC data reflect that 70% of my students who complete the semester (actually staying until the end and turning in their work) pass.
Here are some comments from my fall 2024 students’ reflections that include metacognition:
“I wish my professor knew that English is my favorite class, and I am just so happy that I was able to be apart of this class with her, I loved learning from her.”
“I’m not sure that any of the assignments in this class reflect this properly, but I noticed that in my Education class I had an easier time selecting and evaluating sources for our discussions.”
“Do the work, even though you think you can’t. Put effort into learning and completing things on time.”
“I wish my professor knew that her class has been one of my favorites, and that I have genuinely learned a lot of good writing information from it. I am looking forward to writing again because of the work I have done here. Thank you, professor”
“Knowing that late assignments will not be accepted has led to my success in this class. While it creates an increased amount of stress and pressure on me, I still manage to get it done.”
“The class is awesome, and I have no suggestions.”
“This class has helped me realize that I am capable of managing my time more effectively than I initially believed.”
“I wish my professor knew how helpful the structure of her class modules is.”
“This class has improved my writing skills, even though I never considered myself a writer or aspired to become one.”
“My overall impression of the final portfolio assignment is gratitude. I am grateful that this was the final exam because it was a beautiful way to reflect on all the stories I have written and put them together.”
“The book reviews were so valuable and submitting short stories each week. The book reviews helped me become a better reader; I learned how to slow down with the text and analyze it with a literary lens.”
“Advice I would give to someone would be to take each assignment seriously and answer each question with thought and care, because the benefits of doing each assignment compound over the course of 16 weeks, and you begin to see results halfway in.”
“I wish my Professor knew how much I appreciated her! I have not met you in person, Professor Brown, but I am so grateful for the care and intent you have put into this online course. It was the first online course I took that thoroughly engaged me and for that I thank you.”
“Thank you for creating an environment where I felt supported and encouraged to keep pushing myself, even when things got tough. Your guidance made a big difference in my writing journey this semester.”
References

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Arrona-Palacios, Arturo et al. “Does professors’ gender impact how students evaluate their teaching and the recommendations for the best professor?.” Heliyon vol. 6,10 e05313. 21 Oct. 2020, doi:10.1016/j.heliyon.2020.e05313
Eliot, Krissy. “Are College Students Sexist? New Research Says They Grade Female Profs More Harshly.” California, Cal Alumni Association, 3 Feb. 2016, https://alumni.berkeley.edu/california-magazine/online/are-college-students-sexist-new-research-says-they-grade/.
Perry, John, et al. “Metacognition in Schools: What Does the Literature Suggest about the Effectiveness of Teaching Metacognition in Schools?” Educational Review, vol. 71, no. 4, July 2019, pp. 483–500. EBSCOhost,
Vera, Hoorens, Dekkers Gijs, and Deschrijver Eliane. “Gender Bias in Student Evaluations of Teaching: Students’ Self-Affirmation Reduces the Bias by Lowering Evaluations of Male Professors.”Sex Roles, vol. 84, no. 1-2, 2021, pp. 34-48. ProQuest.
A colleague also suggested I include Student Evaluations of Teaching are Not Valid by John W, Lawrence, but I didn’t get it until after I had already submitted my document.





I agree with your insights – – that learning shouldn’t rest solely on the shoulders of the instructor as someone to evaluate, but is impacted in great part on the efforts and circumstances of the students’ motivation and choices. It’s like evaluating a physician’s effectiveness on a patient who can reject all the advice but whose outcomes hold the doctor responsible. Too many uncontrolled variables in all those evaluations when it gets right down to it – – but yours are amazing and it’s clear your students love you!
Yes, that’s the perfect analogy. It’s ridiculous that the entire burden of student success is put on the teacher.
There’s a whole lot of proof inside that pudding. Here’s hoping your supervisors take into account both your research-based evidence of bias as well as the objective evidence from your students themselves that you’re good at your job.
They added the addendum, so we’re good. Unfortunately, the state needs to get with it so it’s not even brought up in future evals.
Good for you for pushing back on an outdated system that perpetuates harm. It is clear you are doing a great job!
This post is so awesome!!! I feel
Like this is something we should talk about in the division, but also it would be sooooo interesting to see and compare evaluations by the Dean for that same bias… you are a rock star.
Wow, this post taught me a lot about what I already suspected. I also think and wonder how this sexist/racist perception hinders student learning in the longer run; and experiences in life in the longer run. It is powerful that you stood up to this particular student evaluation process. I appreciate the research and time you put into this; and it is clear you are making an impact.
It would be interesting to find out what you said about their learning and experiences. And thank you.
First, thank you for being so vulnerable and posting this. How difficult and uncomfortable of a situation this puts you in when performance evaluations don’t included better data. I’m so glad you included the comments from students in your post and your addendum. Clearly your impact is felt. Kudos to those students who took the time to tell you how valuable your class was. Keep doing the hard work, you are appreciated.
Thank you.
Isn’t it interesting how we are encouraged to use both formal and informal evaluations, formative and summative, and yet those same formats aren’t used to evaluate the educators? I am glad you were able to submit an addendum, and the librarian in me smiled at your included citations of sources. Take that, dean!
Gotta have citations!
100%! I wish I could use bigger font and bold and maybe some flashing text to say that. I love your response. It’s perfect. I’m doing a fair bit of consultations with faculty about their evaluations and I bet you’re shocked to learn that all of the professors reaching out for additional support because their evals are super low are women of color. I have observed in some of their classrooms, and they are effective teachers. So it’s all a bunch of racist and sexist BS. As the research has shown. Again and again. So infuriating.
So infuriating. I’m so glad they have your support.